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Chapter 6 - Rising Martial Initiate.

Here's a poetic English narrative of the provided Indonesian text, with a focus on evocative language and concise phrasing:

Chapter 6: Whispers of the Demon & Blood in the Mire

The dawn's shroud in Stone-Gloom City never truly lifted; it merely shifted form, from a frigid veil to a dense curtain that swallowed the night's sins. Chen Tian, his Three-Eyed Moon Wolf Martial Soul now a faint flicker on his wrist, moved like a shadow. He was no longer the naive village boy. Hunger had etched a new keenness in his gaze, and Hei Xuan's whispers had sown the necessary cruelty for survival.

"Behold them, boy. They are plump lambs, awaiting the slaughter," Hei Xuan's voice echoed in Chen Tian's mind, an unseen sneer clinging to every word. "They walk with heads held high, but their eyes are blind. Their gaze seeks only gold, not the lurking danger in every shadow."

Chen Tian observed. In the bustling market, cultivators mingled with merchants, their spiritual auras faintly radiating like candles in a storm. Some were arrogant, some careless, some still reeling from a night's revelry. Hei Xuan, with eons of experience, was a seasoned hunter now guiding his verdant apprentice.

"That one," Hei Xuan mentally pointed to a Martial Initiate cultivator, roaring with laughter and flaunting a gleaming protective talisman. "He just completed a mission. The aura of his weariness is clear. And look, he's too proud of that cheap trinket."

Chen Tian studied his target. The man appeared strong, far beyond his own newly broken-through Soul Awakening to Martial Initiate realm. Fear crept in, but Hei Xuan swiftly brushed it aside.

"Fear? Hah! Fear is poison to the hunter. Remember, you have 'me.' I will not let my vessel die because of an arrogant earthworm," Hei Xuan scoffed. "Now, observe. Movement. Speed. And most importantly... precision."

Chen Tian moved. He melded with the crowd, his steps as light as a breath of wind. He used his Martial Soul, not to attack, but to sharpen his perception. The three wolf eyes on his wrist flickered, allowing him to discern gaps in the throng, hidden hand movements, and even subtle shifts in his target's aura. It was a strange experience, as if he saw the world through the eyes of a starving predator.

He drew near, his heart a frantic drum. The Martial Initiate was engrossed in an argument with a fruit vendor. This was his chance. Chen Tian's hand moved like lightning, snatching the coin purse dangling from the man's hip.

"Damn it! Thief!"

The cry tore through the air. The cultivator whirled, his eyes blazing with fury. His Martial Initiate aura exploded, pressing down on Chen Tian. It felt like a mountain descending upon him. Chen Tian stumbled, his legs like jelly. The realm difference was immense.

"You village brat! You dare steal from me?!" the man shook his fist, his spiritual Qi roiling.

Chen Tian knew he was in deep trouble. He tried to flee, but his body felt rigid. This was the end.

"Fool! I told you not to be careless!" Hei Xuan snarled in his mind. "Fine, you force my hand."

Suddenly, Chen Tian's dark violet left eye spun faster. Hei Xuan's Void Abyss Eclipse Eye aura, though only a fraction of it, emanated outwards. For the cultivator before him, it was not merely an aura. It was an ancient whisper of dread that pierced his very soul.

The Martial Initiate suddenly reeled back, his eyes wide with terror. He saw a fleeting shadow—something indescribable, darker than night, older than time—that flickered in Chen Tian's eye. His brain screamed "DANGER!" His most primitive instincts commanded him to flee.

"What... what was that?!" the man stammered, cold sweat beading on his brow.

In that split second of the man's confusion, Hei Xuan propelled Chen Tian. "Now! Quickly!"

Chen Tian, still trembling, instinctively swung his fist towards the man's stomach. It wasn't a powerful blow, but with the momentum granted by Hei Xuan and the opponent's disorientation, it was enough to make the man cough and stagger back. Chen Tian immediately turned and shot away, vanishing into the panicked crowd.

He didn't stop running until he was deep within a labyrinth of narrow alleys, where the stench of decay and the gloom became his shroud. His breath came in ragged gasps, his heart pounding. He had survived. And he had succeeded.

"Hah! See that, boy. That's efficiency," Hei Xuan snorted. "You almost died a foolish death. But at least you're not as bad as I thought. Now, let's see your spoils."

Chen Tian opened the coin purse. There were about fifty silver coins, and a small green vial that looked like dried moss.

"This potion... what is it?" Chen Tian asked.

"A low-grade Qi Gathering Potion. Trash, but enough for you. It will help you absorb spiritual Qi faster," Hei Xuan explained. "And these coins... we need more. You need better weapons, and perhaps some protective talismans. Unless you want to keep relying on your stupid luck."

That night, Chen Tian sought a more secluded spot on the outskirts of the city, amidst the ruins of old, nearly uninhabited buildings. He sat cross-legged, the green potion in his hand.

"How... how do I use it?" Chen Tian whispered.

"Just swallow it, fool. Then focus. I will guide you," Hei Xuan said, his voice now slightly more serious. "It will hurt. But if you want power, pain is the price you must pay."

Chen Tian swallowed the potion. It tasted bitter, like fermented mud. Instantly, a burning sensation spread in his stomach, then coursed through his entire body. Spiritual Qi, which he had only faintly perceived before, now felt like a raging wave of heat within him.

"Focus! Don't resist! Let the Qi flow through your meridians!" Hei Xuan roared, his voice firm. "Imagine it like a river. Let it flow, cleansing impurities. If you resist, you will explode into dust!"

Chen Tian gritted his teeth, enduring the immense pain. His body trembled. He felt like he would burst. Cold sweat drenched his forehead. Yet, he remembered Hei Xuan's words: pain is the price to pay. He also remembered the taunts in Qinghe, the faces that sneered at him. He would not give up.

He focused his mind, following Hei Xuan's instructions. Slowly, the raging waves of Qi began to calm slightly, flowing through pathways that felt new within his body. Each breath felt deeper, each heartbeat felt stronger.

Hours passed. The night deepened. Finally, the pain subsided, replaced by a faint sensation of warmth and strength. Chen Tian opened his eyes. The world felt subtly different. The air felt fresher, the city's sounds felt clearer.

"Hah. Not bad," Hei Xuan said. "You managed to absorb a small portion of spiritual Qi. You are still weak as a newborn, but at least you are no longer like a rotting embryo."

Chen Tian felt the change. He hadn't broken through a new realm, but he could sense the spiritual Qi around him, however faintly. He could feel his Three-Eyed Moon Wolf Martial Soul slightly more responsive.

"Now," Hei Xuan said, "sleep. Tomorrow, we will hunt larger prey. And you will learn how to use your Martial Soul properly. This city is a jungle. And you... you have just learned how to roar."

Chen Tian closed his eyes, exhaustion creeping over his body. Yet, a faint smile touched his lips. He had stolen, he had tasted power, and he had survived. Beneath the grey sky, amidst the putrid city, a village boy had taken his first steps on the path of cultivation, with the whispers of an ancient demon as his guide. Blood in the mire bore witness, and the promise of chaos to come.

In the heart of Gloomstone City, where the drunken snores of thugs seamlessly transitioned into the hushed whispers of black-market merchants, a new symphony unfolded for Chen Tian. It was a putrid melody, yet it now resonated like home. With stolen coins and Qi Formation pills clutched tight, time became an elusive phantom, for Hei Xuan tolerated no idleness.

"This ain't no seven-star resort, boy. Move it!" Hei Xuan's thunderous voice ripped through the night's silence, tearing at Chen Tian's composure.

"Every second wasted is a second your enemies grow stronger. Do you wish to die with dignity, or with a full belly, slain by a rat?"

Still reeling from the recently consumed pill, Chen Tian ignored the taunt. He sought a secluded sanctuary, far from the prying eyes of the city's cramped alleys and dilapidated shacks. He needed an undisturbed haven for cultivation.

He scaled a pile of debris on the city's outskirts, discovering a crevice amidst the crumbling rocks – a small cave, just enough for his body. The air was damp, the scent of cold earth and moisture biting at his nostrils. Yet, in this hidden refuge, he found an odd, fleeting peace.

"Sit cross-legged. Qi Formation pill on your tongue. Focus on your breath," Hei Xuan commanded, his tone shifting, becoming grave and instructive. "Feel the spiritual Qi around you. It's everywhere, like the air you breathe. But only those who 'see' can perceive it."

Chen Tian obeyed, swallowing the remaining pill. It tasted like dried dirt, just as before. The fiery sensation he'd felt yesterday intensified manifold, burning his meridians like molten lava. He clenched his jaw, veins throbbing in his neck.

"It hurts!" he screamed inwardly.

"Pain? That's progress, boy! I once had to swallow hellfire and drink the blood of enraged dragons just to feel 'pain' like that," Hei Xuan scoffed.

"You should be grateful; this is the gentlest pain you'll ever know. Now, focus! Imagine the spiritual Qi entering you, flowing from your pores, filling your Qi ocean."

Chen Tian squeezed his eyes shut, forcing himself to concentrate. He envisioned himself as a sponge, absorbing the ethereal mist of Qi around him. Slowly, with each drawn breath, he began to feel something. A warm sensation, like a delicate stream of water, seeped through his skin, crawling over his body, converging in his abdomen – his Qi ocean, as Hei Xuan had called it.

The process was agonizingly slow. Every absorbed drop of Qi felt like a piercing needle. But he persisted. He remembered the sneering faces, the laughter at the Martial Soul ceremony, and the disdainful glances of merchants. Each painful prick was a stark reminder of why he had to become strong.

Time seemed to dissolve beyond the cave's mouth. The moon shifted, and so did the constellations. Chen Tian lost track of how long he had sat there, transfixed in meditation. Then, a powerful surge coursed through him – like a dam finally breaking.

BOOM!

A faint rumble, like drums beating from the earth's depths, echoed in his mind. Chen Tian's body convulsed violently. The pain vanished, replaced by an overwhelming wave of strength and clarity. He felt lighter, more powerful, as if every cell in his body had been reborn.

He opened his eyes. His vision sharpened. The colors within the cave seemed more vibrant. Even the city's putrid stench became more defined. He could perceive the flow of spiritual Qi in the air with far greater clarity, an invisible river flowing all around him.

"Hah! Finally. After a thousand years," Hei Xuan grunted in satisfaction. "You've broken through to the Martial Initiate realm. Congratulations, boy. You're no longer decaying mud dregs. Now you're just slightly tougher mud dregs."

Chen Tian ignored the jibe. He reveled in his newfound power. The Three-Eyed Moon Wolf Martial Soul on his wrist pulsed brighter, its spiraling eyes swirling with faint pride. He could summon it now, feeling it as an extension of himself.

He stood, his legs feeling firmer. He swung his arms, and a new strength surged within him. It was an extraordinary sensation, the first taste of control over his own destiny.

"Now, try using your Martial Soul. Call him out," Hei Xuan instructed. "Don't be a loser who can only steal."

Chen Tian focused his mind. A black-purple mist materialized from his wrist, coalescing into the silhouette of a wolf. The Three-Eyed Moon Wolf now stood beside him, albeit as a transparent illusion. Its three spiraling eyes stared into the darkness, as if scanning for every threat.

"Good. Now you have fangs," Hei Xuan said. "But remember, boy. This is just the beginning. Out there, there are dragons who think they're gods. And you're still just a little lizard."

The next morning, Chen Tian returned to the city. His appearance was still ragged, his hair still blood-red, yet there was a subtle shift in his aura. He moved with a new confidence, as if the city's fog and stench were his to command.

He needed more resources. Qi Formation pills would only take him so far. He required better elixirs, perhaps even cultivation techniques.

"We'll find a more 'interesting' place," Hei Xuan declared. "There are several underground fighting arenas in the eastern part of the city. Places where cultivators proudly display their power. And where careless people often lose their possessions."

Chen Tian followed Hei Xuan's sharpened instincts. He slipped through the throng, his eyes like a hawk's. He spotted a Martial Adept cultivator, with a giant axe for a Martial Soul, brazenly showcasing his abilities in the street, threatening merchants reluctant to pay his 'tax.' The Martial Adept's aura was far more formidable than any Martial Initiate he had encountered before.

"Don't be foolish," Hei Xuan warned. "This Martial Adept is too strong for you right now. Even with your Martial Initiate. But look at the pouch on his hip."

The cultivator's pouch looked thick, bulging with spiritual coins.

"You could get a lot from there," Hei Xuan tempted.

Chen Tian felt adrenaline surge. This time, there was no fear, only calculation. He waited, observed, seeking the opportune moment. When the cultivator was distracted, busy making threats, Chen Tian moved. Swift as a shadow, elusive as smoke. His small hand snatched the coin pouch.

"Damn it! Who was that?!" the cultivator roared, his eyes wide.

But Chen Tian was already gone. He darted through the crowd, the Three-Eyed Moon Wolf Martial Soul on his wrist flashing, granting him a boost of speed and awareness. He had escaped again, without a physical confrontation.

"Hah! Not bad, boy! You learn quickly," Hei Xuan laughed. "Perhaps there's hope for you, if you don't die foolishly."

Chen Tian offered no reply. He found a secluded spot and counted his coins. The sum was far greater than before. Enough to buy better pills, perhaps even some basic defensive talismans.

Yet, amidst his small triumph, he sensed something. As if eyes were watching him. Eyes from beyond the shadows of Gloomstone City. His once insignificant acts were now beginning to draw attention.

From a distance, on the roof of a dilapidated house, the silhouette of a thin old man with sharp eyes observed Chen Tian disappearing into an alley. A faint smile etched itself on his dry lips.

"Seems there's a new little rat in the city," the old man whispered to himself. "A little rat with a strange aura."

Chen Tian continued his stride, his Martial Soul faintly flickering. He was a Martial Initiate now. A small step, yet immensely significant. The flame within him had ignited. He was no longer just surviving; he was beginning to hunt. And within the eternal gloom, that tiny ember began to swell, ready to forge a greater destiny in Gloomstone City.

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