"Freee~~"
[Welcome, ladies and gentlemen!]
"Freee~~"
[Tonight's guests: Thorn the brooding Beedrill and Grip the Crusher!]
"Bee~~"
[Leave me alone. I must train.]
"Gru~~"
[I want to eat rocks.]
"Freee~"
[Grip, that's not part of a balanced diet. Thorn, say something inspiring.]
"Bee~~"
[I am the night. I am vengeance. I am—]
"Freee~"
[—cut off by the Author because we're out of time! See you next chapter!]
📓 Evan's Journal
Month 1, Day 30
Location: Hau'oli City
Time: 6:30 PM
Today's training pushed everyone to their limits. With the Grand Trial approaching, I've focused on mastering anime-inspired techniques, particularly from Naruto. Thorn has successfully created Surge Sting, his own version of a Chidori-style attack. Grip learned Volt Tackle through our synchronization drills for Electric Flow. Now, all three—Thorn, Trixie, and Grip—can effectively channel Electric Flow. This allows us to progress to the next phase of training.
Last night,
Prof. Kukui: "Evan, I'll take you to Iki Town. It's time to meet the Island Kahuna, complete your Grand Trial, and earn a new Z-Crystal."
Evan: "Thanks, Professor. I won't let you down."
Today
Time: 09:00 AM
Location: Iki Town – Ceremonial Arena
Golden sunlight bathes the ceremonial platform while ocean breezes rustle through the palm trees. A crowd gathers, buzzing with excitement. Kahuna Hala steps forward, broad-shouldered and smiling warmly.
Hala: "You've done well, Evan. Passing the Island Trials is no easy task. But this is the moment of truth. Strength is important, but so is your bond with your Pokémon."
Evan (nodding): "We're ready. Thorn, let's go!"
A flash of light erupts from Evan's Poké Ball. Thorn, the Alolan Beedrill, zooms into the air, his wings buzzing with electric energy.
Hala (raising an eyebrow): "A Beedrill? I haven't seen one like that before… This should be interesting. Makuhita, I choose you!"
Makuhita pounds its fists together, eyes fixed on Thorn.
🔷 Grand Trial Battle Begins! (Third-Person POV)
Hala: "Makuhita, use Fake Out!"
Makuhita lunges, striking quickly. Thorn flinches, slightly knocked off-course midair.
Evan: "Recover—then Poison Web!"
Thorn spins in the air, launching violet threads that stick across the battlefield, creating sticky traps on the ground.
Hala: "Arm Thrust, push through!"
Makuhita charges, impeded by the webbing.
Evan: "Now—Electric Flow! Close in with Surge Sting!"
Thorn crackles with energy and darts forward like lightning, his stinger glowing with charged venom. The strike lands firmly—Makuhita is jolted, stumbling backward before collapsing.
Announcer: "Makuhita is unable to battle!"
Hala (grinning): "A self-taught move? You're full of surprises. Let's keep going—Crabrawler, you're up!"
The scrappy crab Pokémon punches the ground as it enters, eyes burning with determination.
Evan: "Thorn, return. Trixie, show them how it's done!"
Trixie, the Alolan Butterfree, gracefully flutters out, her wings sparkling in the sun.
Hala: "Rock Smash—go!"
Evan: "Freeze Web, then fall back!"
Trixie sends a frost-laced web into Crabrawler's path, slowing its charge as icy mist creeps up its legs.
Evan: "Now—Fairy Wind!"
Trixie whips up a sparkling breeze that slams into Crabrawler, pushing it back.
Hala: "Power-Up Punch! Break through it!"
Crabrawler fights through the frost, landing a punch. Trixie winces but stays airborne.
Evan: "Let's turn the tide—Draining Kiss! Go!"
Trixie flutters forward and delivers a shimmering kiss. Crabrawler's energy drains as she heals herself. The crab wobbles, then topples.
Announcer: "Crabrawler is unable to battle!"
Hala (nodding): "You fight smart. But now comes your true challenge. Hariyama, step forth!"
Hariyama enters with thunderous steps, shaking the platform with each move. He slams his palms together with a booming echo.
Evan: "Trixie, Silver Wind! Hold him off!"
Glittering energy bursts from Trixie's wings, but Hariyama charges through.
Hala: "Smelling Salts! Now!"
Hariyama strikes powerfully—Trixie spirals to the ground, knocked out.
Evan (softly): "You did great, Trixie. Rest up. Grip—it's time!"
Grip the Grubbin scuttles into battle, electricity sparking between his pincers.
Hala (raising a brow): "A Grubbin? Brave or foolish?"
Evan (grinning): "You'll find out. Electro Web, then Mud-Slap!"
Grip fires off a binding web that traps Hariyama's legs, then kicks mud into his eyes. The giant bellows in frustration.
Evan: "Electric Flow—then Volt Tackle! Let's go!"
Grip surges with electricity and launches himself like a missile. The impact shakes the ground—both Pokémon recoil, but Hariyama staggers.
Hala: "Knock Off! End it!"
Hariyama swings wildly—missing! Grip darts behind him.
Evan: "Now—Vice Grip! Finish it!"
Grip clamps down hard on Hariyama's leg and twists. With a roar, Hariyama crashes down.
Announcer: "Hariyama is unable to battle! Victory goes to... Evan!"
The crowd erupts in cheers.
Hala (approaching with pride): "You've demonstrated strategy, creativity, and a deep connection with your team. As tradition dictates… I present you with this."
He places a glowing red Fightinium Z in Evan's hand.
Evan (smiling): "Thank you, Kahuna Hala. We're just getting started!"
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Trying out new style, So is it good?
Yes
OR
No